The red building is so arrogant

Chapter 696

Chapter 696

After reaching a consensus, the master and servant devoted all their attention to the preparations.

First, I pulled Jiao Shun to ask questions, and after confirming that he couldn't say anything new, I started to discuss the character design of the protagonist of the story on my own.

Age of birth, height and appearance, basic necessities of life, rules of Liyuan...

In fact, Jiao Shun has some impressions of these things, but if he does everything himself, firstly, it weakens Lin Daiyu's sense of participation, and secondly, if the book is finished in three to five days, what should he use to hold Lin Daiyu back?

That's why I always just say that I'm also 'following others' and don't know too many details.

He also said that if he wanted to ask more questions, he would have to invite Jiang Yuhan back from Europa immediately—and this was naturally impossible, so Lin Daiyu and Ouguan left him to discuss it on their own.

Seeing the two of them—especially Ou Guan, immersed in it like a madman, Jiao Shun took the opportunity to quietly exit the study, called Xue Yan to explain a few words, took advantage of the situation and made out for a while, and then rode away on the bike.

When I got home and told Shi Xiangyun about this, Shi Xiangyun was also eager to try it, but Jiao Shun didn't dare to let her waste her mind at this time, so she said it anyway, and finally used Wang and Xu as an excuse to make her temporarily dismiss the idea .

However, it also made a promise that the content of Lin Daiyu's book will be updated to the home simultaneously.

Silent all night.

The next day Jiao Shun got up from Xing Xiuyan's bed, washed and ate, hurried to the yamen, and began to gather his officials to discuss the distribution of subsidies for this year's Mid-Autumn Festival.

Anyone who has worked in a government unit knows that the distribution of money and power is the most test of leadership.

It's easy for the engineering side. As Jiao Shun is the leader, he can push such things to the subordinates—but in the Ministry of Engineering, he is doing the job of the chief executive, so it is naturally his duty to do so.

So that evening, Jiao Shun rarely worked overtime for more than an hour, so he didn't go to Peach Blossom Lane.

It was already the afternoon of the third day when I saw Lin Daiyu again.

Just knocked a few times on the gate of the courtyard, Xueyan, Zijuan, Chunxian, together with Wang Momo came out in a panic.

Jiao Shun was taken aback, and hurriedly asked what happened.

"It's amazing!"

Wang Momo excitedly said: "Miss seems to be possessed these two days, and she can't care about eating or sleeping, and she spends all day bored with Ou Guan in the study writing some scripts, how do you make it happen?! "

Only then did Jiao Shun breathe a sigh of relief, and said in relief: "If she has a sustenance, wouldn't she spend her day-to-day thinking wildly? Don't worry, mom, I'll go and enlighten her right away. At least don't miss dinner and sleep."

With that said, he went straight to the study.

Although he had made preparations, Jiao Shun was still surprised when he entered the study and saw the messy scene inside.

But I saw discarded manuscript paper all over the floor, and there was an ink-stained piece of paper hanging under the table, in the corner of the wall, and even on the vase.

Both Lin Daiyu and Ouguan were unkempt, especially Ouguan, who didn't know how to scrub and wash off the black spots on his face.

Jiao Shun looked back at Xueyan, Xueyan immediately whispered: "It's not that we don't want to clean up, it's the girl who stops me."

tsk~

Although I guessed that Lin Daiyu would invest in it before, I didn't expect to invest in it to this extent.

Jiao Shun walked to the table, subconsciously glanced at the table, expecting to see a stack of drafts, but found that the table was clearly a stack of blank paper.

"how?"

He couldn't help being surprised: "There are so many waste manuscripts, and you haven't even written the beginning?"

Lin Daiyu raised her head and gave him a sideways glance, then lowered her head to look at the white paper luck on the table.

It was only then that Jiao Shun realized that not only the lotus official had turned into a colorful cat, but also some ink stains on her forehead.

At this time, the lotus official seemed to have finally discovered Jiao Shun, and was so frightened that he hurriedly bowed to salute.

Jiao Shun pointed to Daiyu, then pointed to the white paper on the table, and asked, "What's going on here?"

"The girl always feels that she is not good enough, so she keeps..."

Jiao Shun immediately understood what was going on.

Simply put, it just failed to adapt to changes in the subject matter.

The poems and songs that Lin Daiyu is good at are all about pennies and pennies in words, either by chance, or after a long time of deliberation, in short, she must try her best to do the best within her ability.

But this approach seems a bit out of date in the novel.

It's not that it can't be used at all, but it should generally be written first after the draft, and then edited and refined. If the tone is pulled to the extreme at the beginning, it may be difficult to write later.

Of course, it wouldn't be difficult if it was anticlimactic like most web articles, but how could Lin Daiyu, who is always in the habit of trying to make ends meet, make such a choice?

So it's only natural for her to know Calvin.

Jiao Shun explained his analysis, but Lin Daiyu sighed: "In fact, I also wanted to understand this point later, thinking that I should write out the context of the story instead of haggling - but I still haven't been able to write the opening chapter. !"

Jiao Shunqi asked, "And why?"

Lin Daiyu took a deep breath, picked up the "Pride and Prejudice" and flipped through it casually, saying: "When I first read this book, although I was attracted by the content of the book, I always felt that the words and sentences were too plain, but it is It is only when I start to write that I realize that these plain and real things are the most difficult to describe.”

But it turned out that after Sister Lin realized the disadvantages of being greedy for everything, she also tried to sort out the context of the story first, but she soon encountered another bottleneck.

When writing about the characters' dialogue expressions and psychological activities, although she may not be very satisfied with her results, she can always maintain a level of seven or eight.

The writing was so detailed that she felt superficial when she looked at it, as if she was expressing her sorrow for writing new words, without any real feeling at all.

The writing is concise and exquisite. With her talent and poetic foundation, she can write enough charm to attract people's imagination, but if she writes it like this, it will be the size of a Tang and Song legend at most.

If she hadn't read "Pride and Prejudice", maybe she would think that there is nothing wrong with writing a legend of Tang and Song Dynasties, but now...

She obviously couldn't accept such a result.

Or maybe, with Sister Lin's personality and her age, she is not suitable for novels, at least not suitable for solo creation.

Jiao Shun was thinking silently in his heart, trying to figure out how to give her a chance to give up her plan to write a book for now—although he, Jiao, instigated this, but she couldn't just watch Lin Daiyu bump into Nan The wall doesn't look back, does it?

But when the words came to his lips, a flash of inspiration suddenly flashed in his mind, and he changed his mind and said: "If not, can you ask someone else to help you with the details?"

Lin Daiyu frowned slightly, and said seriously, "I'm afraid Xiangyun won't succeed, but Sister Xing, after all, she has more knowledge, maybe..."

"Xiuyan is certainly more knowledgeable, but she may not be the most suitable candidate!" Jiao Shun smiled slightly, and said confidently: "If you think about it carefully, isn't there someone who has written similar things?"

"Write something similar?"

Lin Daiyu was taken aback for a moment, and then looked straight at Jiao Shun, because she suddenly thought that the 'diary' written by Jiao Shun at the beginning was somewhat straightforward and sensational.

Besides, this story was provided by him...

"Etc., etc!"

Seeing her staring at him, Jiao Shun's eyes gradually brightened, Jiao Shun hurriedly stopped again, and said dumbfoundedly: "If I want to have that ability, I don't have to wait until now to introduce myself—I mean the person who completed those diaries back then." .”

The person who completed the diary?

Lin Daiyu's pretty face turned cold, and she immediately asked, "What do you mean by mentioning her all of a sudden?"

"Means nothing."

Jiao Shun spread his hands and said, "I just thought of it suddenly, don't you think it's inappropriate?"

Lin Daiyu was silent. After Jiao Shun mentioned it, she also found that this man's writing style was indeed the most suitable, and he was not inferior in terms of talent and insight.

only……

She twisted her body, turned her back to Jiao Shun and said with a sneer, "Then you can just tell her the story yourself, why should I do anything extra?"

"Haha~"

Jiao Shuncong hugged her neck from behind, rested his chin on Xiang's shoulder, and said with a smile: "Sister's talent is like jade and jade, if you pick one out, it's a treasure, but if you want to use it as a head jewelry, it's still a treasure. It needs some gold, silver, copper and iron to set it off—but no matter how you set it off, there is absolutely no reason to overwhelm the host!"

Lin Daiyu was struggling with anger at first, when she heard him comparing herself to a treasure and that person to gold, silver, copper and iron, her heart sank for a moment, she snorted, and said inappropriately: "You don't know how to appreciate Poems are just to coax me casually."

"I can't taste poetry, but I can taste people."

As Jiao Shun spoke, he poked his head close to her lips.

Lin Daiyu subconsciously tilted her head, but she was still kissed by Jiao Shun brutally, until she was flustered and short of breath, before giving up.

Seeing this scene, the lotus officer next to him hastily exited the door and closed the door behind him.

But Lin Daiyu gasped for a moment, finally calmed down, but suddenly frowned and said: "Even if she is the most suitable, but once the fact that I am still in the capital is leaked..."

"You feel."

Jiao Shun stopped the conversation and asked, "Will she leak this news?"

Lin Daiyu was silent again.

After taking a deep breath for a while, he said decisively, "Then try it!"

If Jiao Shun didn't say this, she might not be willing to rely on him, but now, she wants to know what choice that person will make.

…………

Two days later, Xue Mansion.

"Your uncle can also use this, and these..."

With tears in her eyes, Aunt Xue filled the box with items related to basic necessities of life, food, housing and transportation, interspersing a few childhood memories from time to time.

Xue Baochai next to her kept silent.

In two days, Wang Ziteng will arrive in the capital. Relying on Jia Yun to help build a bridge, the Wang family has been allowed to meet Wang Ziteng privately on the pier—of course, this is just a private exchange between the middle and lower classes, not an official one. license.

In addition to Wang Ziteng's wife and children, Mrs. Wang, Aunt Xue and Jia Baoyu will be present.

Xue Pan originally wanted to go too, but Aunt Xue declined on his behalf—mainly because she was worried that this guy would show his weakness in front of Mrs. Wang.

Right now, Aunt Xue is preparing to visit Wang Ziteng.

However, Xue Baochai's attention was still out of focus, and she was unconsciously thinking about the person and affairs of 'Jia Yun'.

In terms of background, he and Jia Baoyu can be talked about every day, but now regardless of family background, I am afraid that no one will think that he is inferior to Jia Baoyu.

What caused all this was Jiao Shun's favor and promotion of Jia Yun, and Baoyu's temper that could not be supported by mud.

Hey~

Even the opponent's henchmen can't compare, so how can he be compared with himself?

at the same time.

Ying'er was tying plum blossoms on the porch outside the door when she saw a servant woman walking in with a letter in her hand. Seeing her, she hurriedly laughed and said, "Miss Lao, help me with palm eyes. This is a rickshaw driver just now." It was delivered, and it was said to be entrusted by our lady's old stock exchange."

"Miss's old friend?"

Ying'er put down the plum blossom net in her hand, took a glance at it, squeezed it vigorously, and found that there seemed to be a thick stack of letter paper inside, so she said to the servant woman: "Since that is the case, I will pass it to the young lady later. "

"Then it's Miss Lao—by the way, the coachman said that it's still the same, and he wants to come to our house to wait for a reply."

The servant woman added a word, and then she went with a thousand thanks.

Then Ying'er went inside with the letter, handed it to Xue Baochai calmly, and whispered: "This must have been collected from outside, otherwise, I wouldn't have made such an effort to send it in."

Xue Baochai didn't care to listen to what she had to say. Although Gain claimed to be surnamed Su on the envelope, she recognized Lin Daiyu's handwriting at a glance!

Didn't Sister Lin go back to Suzhou?

Xue Baochai was full of doubts, so she asked her mother for leave, and found a quiet place to disassemble it to take a closer look.

However, when she was even more puzzled, the letter first used seven or eight pages to talk about the pessimistic separation and reunion of the two actors, and then gave a few brilliant clips, and then suggested that the two parties cooperate to interpret this story into a story. Long storybook.

Where is this going? !

A smart person like Xue Baochai was confused by the content of the letter for a while, and he didn't know what Lin Daiyu wanted to do.

wrong!

Sister Lin never hides anything, maybe she really just wants to write this story?

After making a judgment based on her understanding of Lin Daiyu, Xue Baochai still couldn't believe it.

When is this, why do you still have the heart to write something? !

"Girl, what's wrong with you?"

It wasn't until Yinger's call reached Xue Baochai's ears that she suddenly woke up from her confusion.

Looking down at the letter again, Baochai unconsciously used her strength to deform the letter paper, then took a deep breath and said, "It's nothing, I just didn't expect to be able to contact Sister Su again after not seeing you for so many years." superior."

"Sister Su?"

Ying'er was baffled, she didn't seem to have such a person in her memory, right?

But judging from the appearance of his daughter just now, she is obviously a very important friend.

Xue Baochai put the letter away in a leisurely manner, and asked casually, "The coachman said that he will come tomorrow to wait for a reply?"

After getting Yinger's confirmation, she nodded slightly and said, "That's good."

In just a short moment, she made two decisions: one was to find out what kind of medicine was sold in Lin Daiyu's gourd; the other was to not let Jia Baoyu know that Lin Daiyu was still in Beijing no matter what. !

(End of this chapter)